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November 7th, 2008 #1
Please critique My Animated Film!
Please let me know what you think!
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Last edited by breeson; November 17th, 2008 at 05:51 PM.
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I love this! The animation seemed a little bit stiff, but you might have done that on purpose. In my opinion, it would help it "flow" more.
But I LOVE the storyline! It's so funny and entertaining. Plus whoever did the voices is like the most amazing person ever.
So yeah nice job.
November 8th, 2008 #3
Nothing to crit. Awesome! Haha.
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November 23rd, 2008 #6
Hey Everyone,, thanks for checkin out my animation!
I'm gonna start posting comics in the sketchbook section which I'm gonna try to update regularily!
Check it out here
December 15th, 2008 #7
Thanks to everyone that voted!!
March 5th, 2009 #8Registered User
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March 5th, 2009 #9
LMAO!!! thats just fricken great XD really love the style and the quick actions.
March 6th, 2009 #10
March 6th, 2009 #11
hahaha hilarious x]
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March 8th, 2009 #12
Awesome !!! haha
March 9th, 2009 #13
LoL, the best part is when he's like "time to GET WASTED!". I like the style you used. It looks good. If I were to critique it I would just say to add some extra frames here and there to make it flow smoother, so it doesn't look as choppy. Excellent job though, this is great.