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November 7th, 2008 #1
Please critique My Animated Film!
Please let me know what you think!
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Last edited by breeson; November 17th, 2008 at 06:51 PM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberNovember 8th, 2008 #2Registered User
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I love this! The animation seemed a little bit stiff, but you might have done that on purpose. In my opinion, it would help it "flow" more.
But I LOVE the storyline! It's so funny and entertaining. Plus whoever did the voices is like the most amazing person ever.
So yeah nice job.
November 8th, 2008 #3
Nothing to crit. Awesome! Haha.
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November 23rd, 2008 #6
Hey Everyone,, thanks for checkin out my animation!
I'm gonna start posting comics in the sketchbook section which I'm gonna try to update regularily!
Check it out here
December 15th, 2008 #7
Thanks to everyone that voted!!
March 5th, 2009 #8Registered User
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March 5th, 2009 #9
LMAO!!! thats just fricken great XD really love the style and the quick actions.
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March 8th, 2009 #12
Awesome !!! haha
March 9th, 2009 #13
LoL, the best part is when he's like "time to GET WASTED!". I like the style you used. It looks good. If I were to critique it I would just say to add some extra frames here and there to make it flow smoother, so it doesn't look as choppy. Excellent job though, this is great.
March 10th, 2009 #14
You have anticipation and reactions, poses and gags... but I don't see any timing really. What happened to your inbetweens? Listen, Im all for snappy timing, but I think its probably a good idea to vary it up a little bit. The only things I saw moving in a calculated way really... were the inanimate objects. your poses are great, super legible silluhettes, but this project could have nothing but benifited from a little more in the way of intellegent timing. Also if your doing a personal project, its always better to work on ones. Almost everything looks better on ones, precisely because we can work with the timing of our actions.
I resent your lack of bones, but chalk it up to a stylistic choice.
Anyways, your work is up there, I'm not trying to drag you down or anything.