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November 2nd, 2008 #1
Painting Sikh History: Baba Deep Singh
Hey everyone! I am working on a painting based on Sikh history. Its depicting Baba Deep Singh in war with the Afghan army in an attempt to defend the Golden Temple. More background information can be found on wikipedia. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baba_Deep_Singh
Being very inexperienced in painting war scenes. I grabbed the banner from :http://www.blizzard.com/diablo3/char.../barbarian.xml, and started to work with it. This is what I have so far.
(He is supposed to be holding a straight sword in his hand, along with the guy on the horse.)
So.. critique away!
Last edited by prince911; November 3rd, 2008 at 03:34 PM.
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I think it is looking pretty good so far.
It would be easier to crit if you roughed in the rest of the piece (sketchy). Pay attention to your hands... it feels like the guy in the middle only has 3 fingers holding on to that sword and the hand to the far right feels messed up too.
November 3rd, 2008 #3
Ok will put up one with more completed piece including missing objects, as I get time from school. ( I am not a full time painter) Don't mind if I don't reply to your posts right away, but keep an eye out as I will be back with updates on what I have done based on the crits.
November 3rd, 2008 #4
No worries... I think I should add that one thing that I do like about this piece is what looks like a swirling vortex in the background leading our eyes to where the sword will go.
This feels like the best composition out of the pieces that you have posted... although I am not sure about the placement of the character in the upper right.
November 3rd, 2008 #5
And i am actually trying to get rid of the swirly thing by adding a normal sky that mimics the effect. But then I might forget realism for a minute and keep it! You should read my first posts lol, these are supposed to be portraying Sikh history.
About the character in the upper right: Originallly what I had was-
then another artist suggested that I enlarge Baba Deep Singh by about 25%, and take out the soldier on the far left, as he clutters the painting.
November 3rd, 2008 #6
November 3rd, 2008 #7
This is what the artist said about the one you liked better.
"I like the composition on this one...one recommendation, make Baba Deep singh and the mughal he's ligting about 25% bigger, but push them further to the right so that Baba Deep occupies the same space, you'll loose a bit of the Mughal but that's o.k. Right now it's too balanced. Also consider getting rid of the Mughal on extreme left, he's cluttering up that side. "
November 3rd, 2008 #8
Man oh man I can't wait for Diablo 3
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November 3rd, 2008 #10
I thought he helped add to the triangular shape of the side over there. Without him, the heads on that side kindof form a line.
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November 3rd, 2008 #12
I had a quick look....I think the trouble with the hand on the far right is that its the wrong one / a right hand couldn't be where that one is....but it's an easy fix !......just switch it and make it a left arm / draw the BACK of the hand instead....and then the intersecting arm of the hero ought to be behind it.....THEN those two will fit each other
November 4th, 2008 #13
No that's not the case here. His right arm is supposed to be behind Deep Singh's arm since Deep Singh is sort of blocking his attack, if you don't see that then help me correct the sequence.