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    After way too many months on and off, and quite a bit of help, Metatron is (hopefully) finally finished. Thanks for all the tips and critique

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    For the most part, good rendering, but a few issues with it; the head looks mispositioned, the left leg looks a little deformed right at the breaking point unless it's just a really long foot!, the right foot looks weird, I think it's the dark shadow on it, the abdominal section could use a little more definition (muscle, tone), and I think lastly, the shadowing on the bicep doesn't look right try to get some reference for it, oh one more thing I noticed, there is bold outline/crease that defines the right knee, but it shouldn't be there, it should be a smooth transition from knee to calve, (you accomplished this on the other side of the same leg). Hope all this doesn't discourage you, just trying to help and of course it's all my opinion. good effort, keep posting.
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