Agree with Loathsome there. I always feel it too, but never find the right words to say it (cuz i don't really know what the exact problem is). The feeling i get from your works from imagination are something like "monochromatic with specks of colors everywhere", it sounds confusing, i know, that's why i didn't say it. So it's a good thing you have Loathsome there, to crit you. I guess he made his point clearly And yeah, i don't see the problem in the previous update too (the man with a turban on), so i think that's the thing to apply in your future works that come from imagination.
Anyway, i like and am enjoying your studies lately. You're doing good, mate. Keep going