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hi im new to the boards and was hoping for some critique on this piece , thx in advance
Last edited by silverslash; November 17th, 2003 at 02:55 PM.
Yay its up! ,miracles can happen. now any comments?
Last edited by silverslash; November 16th, 2003 at 10:58 AM.
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hmm there u go that link should work .
A good start....I would keep the colouring style more uniform tho.
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more uniform? how? im open to suggestions.
Just my opinion...but the figure looks really pasted into the background..the flowers are nice, but the grids are distracting..also the wings don't seem to be apart of the figure..they look like they are more apart of the background..if It was my piece, I would go back and focus more on the figure...
Because of the grid on top of the wings, the wings don't look like they are attached to the person. And the person's head is sorta distracting because, at least to me, it looks out of proportion.
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thats not a bad idea bgermain, i think ill try that.
daemon, good suggestion i think ill play around with the grid and try to put it behind the wings.
Thanks for all the input guys. kkep it coming :bash: