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October 10th, 2008 #1
welcome to my sketchbook :) || 09/04/2012
Hi, this is my sketchbook. You are very wellcome to crit and tell what you think about my works.
Hope you enjoy
Last edited by Richard Hade; April 8th, 2012 at 07:46 PM.
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I think you got some great concepts but maybe you should try to define the forms a bit more like the drawing of the man in gray is a bit to blurry for me. And the ogre in the rain of fire is nice but to dark/undefined for me (could be my monitor to :p)
Anyway, cool work, great concepts (love the floating mouse XD)
October 10th, 2008 #3
Thanks for sharing your opinion. Yes, you'r right and I'm working on my skills, trying to find the best way to show what's in my mind. The "floating mouse" is my latest work and I am supprised about result.
Ogre in flames definitely needs some rework.
Thank you again for crit
Last edited by Richard Hade; October 10th, 2008 at 03:12 PM.
October 10th, 2008 #4
I especially like the top two whimsical images. The third, too, but it's a bit hard to see what's going on.
Most of your other images, including the third one to some degree, are too dark on my monitor to make out detail.
I agree with fullmetaljacket about the figure needing some work.
All in all, it's a pleasure to see what you're doing with Corel Painter IX.5. Please keep on sharing and posting links to this thread at The PainterFactory.
October 10th, 2008 #5
Hi, I think you have very nice concepts, I could see that top one (the one with the tail) as a toy.
I think the upper body is a bit large (or legs to small) on that male study you have done, especially his upper right arm, nice rendering though, maybe it could be even darker in some parts.
I like that fluffy creature with the eyes, really like the lightning in that one, maybe you could put some of the creatures in some kind of environment instead of just using a texture as back ground.
Keep it up!
October 10th, 2008 #6
October 26th, 2008 #7
October 26th, 2008 #8
I like how you're using contrasting colors. It makes all of your work really pop off the page. Keep it up!
October 26th, 2008 #9
November 2nd, 2008 #10
February 16th, 2009 #11
First work for a long time...
May 28th, 2009 #12
July 1st, 2009 #13
July 14th, 2009 #14
November 6th, 2009 #15
January 3rd, 2010 #16
January 3rd, 2010 #17
January 3rd, 2010 #18
Love the first bar sketch. Also, amaxing rendering and focus skills. You certainly know how to direct the viewer's eye wherever you want. As others have said, now you should work on form, that's the area where you can improve the most.
Keep up the good work, and happy new year!
January 22nd, 2010 #19
January 22nd, 2010 #20
cool sketcbook you have going here
keep it up man
have a good one
sketchbook updated October 6th
March 16th, 2010 #21
April 6th, 2010 #22
April 6th, 2010 #23
You're improving very nicely. As for critiques, I would say to focus a bit more values as opposed to colors so you can give your images a bit more depth. I think you can benefit from working simply in greyscale for a bit, then going back to colors. Keep it going!
April 6th, 2010 #24
April 12th, 2010 #25
August 24th, 2010 #26
August 26th, 2010 #27
August 26th, 2010 #28
Heeeyyyyy.... Good progress dude! I especially like the lady in post #22. Whatever you were doing there keep doing that!
All in all, very impressive improvement!
October 26th, 2010 #29
October 26th, 2010 #30
hi there you've got a real good stuff
keep it up mate and have fun!!
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