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    welcome to my sketchbook :) || 09/04/2012

    Hi, this is my sketchbook. You are very wellcome to crit and tell what you think about my works.

    Hope you enjoy
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    Hi m8

    I think you got some great concepts but maybe you should try to define the forms a bit more like the drawing of the man in gray is a bit to blurry for me. And the ogre in the rain of fire is nice but to dark/undefined for me (could be my monitor to :p)

    Anyway, cool work, great concepts (love the floating mouse XD)

    Grts

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    Thanks for sharing your opinion. Yes, you'r right and I'm working on my skills, trying to find the best way to show what's in my mind. The "floating mouse" is my latest work and I am supprised about result.
    Ogre in flames definitely needs some rework.

    Thank you again for crit
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    Hi,

    I especially like the top two whimsical images. The third, too, but it's a bit hard to see what's going on.

    Most of your other images, including the third one to some degree, are too dark on my monitor to make out detail.

    I agree with fullmetaljacket about the figure needing some work.

    All in all, it's a pleasure to see what you're doing with Corel Painter IX.5. Please keep on sharing and posting links to this thread at The PainterFactory.

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    Hi, I think you have very nice concepts, I could see that top one (the one with the tail) as a toy.

    I think the upper body is a bit large (or legs to small) on that male study you have done, especially his upper right arm, nice rendering though, maybe it could be even darker in some parts.

    I like that fluffy creature with the eyes, really like the lightning in that one, maybe you could put some of the creatures in some kind of environment instead of just using a texture as back ground.

    Keep it up!

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    I've updated this images so you guys who are using Safari, FireFox 3 (with color management enabled) or other browsers which can read ICC profiles can see proper and brighter images, as they should
    Last edited by Richard Hade; October 11th, 2008 at 10:06 AM.

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    Speedpaint (ca. 30min)

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    I like how you're using contrasting colors. It makes all of your work really pop off the page. Keep it up!

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    nice work, like the colours you use

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    Butterflies graveyard...

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    Long time without posting, many changes in my life. But now, some big (IMO) update. Hope you crit it a lot and point me every thing that I have to improve.


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    New (better?) version...

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    Few new works. Please, crit is VERY welcome

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    Man pose study form Virtual Pose

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    Love the first bar sketch. Also, amaxing rendering and focus skills. You certainly know how to direct the viewer's eye wherever you want. As others have said, now you should work on form, that's the area where you can improve the most.
    Keep up the good work, and happy new year!

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    speedpaints:
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    cool sketcbook you have going here
    keep it up man
    have a good one
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    You're improving very nicely. As for critiques, I would say to focus a bit more values as opposed to colors so you can give your images a bit more depth. I think you can benefit from working simply in greyscale for a bit, then going back to colors. Keep it going!

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    I second cgaddict. Spend some time with greyscale to add depth. I would also suggest resisting the scribble. If you need to scribble, use a bigger brush.

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    Thank guys for Your advices . I like working in grayscale, but hate colouring them . Can't blend colours good enough.

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    Heeeyyyyy.... Good progress dude! I especially like the lady in post #22. Whatever you were doing there keep doing that!
    All in all, very impressive improvement!

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    hi there you've got a real good stuff

    keep it up mate and have fun!!

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