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    JUST TAKE A glance TELL me what u THINK

    i am new i've just recently been geting into art but i have been doin it since i was ten i feel it now more than ever though and would love to become great ..i think every aspect of art is beautiful. so plz crit i need more help thatnk you


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    i forget were i got but its a ref

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    ref from a little thumbnail i found

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    my hand studies would really like to know what u think

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    I say that you are up to par with the pros. And this is coming from someone whose design skills are better than his drawing skills.

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    30 mins plz crit

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    looks like someone has some work to do. just draw more and youll get there man

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    just havin some fun with it

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    Plz Crit I Neeeedd It

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    hello you'r doing good keep up with those studying i like that japanese mask it reminds me yoshimitsu from soul calibur or tekken games but more from soul calibur

    in need of help please comment and constructive CRITIQUE
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    You are doing good so far. Make sure to construct the human figure with basic shapes before you add any details.

    If you're bored with anatomy studies, try making characters out of some poses.

    Are these studies from life? Photographs are ok, but if its all you got you should definitely try making some self-portraits for practice as well.

    ~cheers

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    hey man, the key here is to study all your basics. Thats how you get good, the only way! So just keep on studying everything and drawing everyday and you'll see improvements as you go. It wont all happen at first so just keep at it!

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    yarosh: thank you the mask is one of my favorites

    Nquyet: thank you the first ones are studies from ref but the rest is mostly from mind or from ny structure of man DVD that has really been a huge help

    Mr.Delicious: thank you for the advice n i will keep posting

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    You are definitely on the right track. I started doing some anatomy studies to help with my figures. I have also been drawing other people (quick sketches) and some self-portraits. These exercises might help you too...especially if you make them fun.The more you draw the better you get. Good luck!

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    the studies seem to be helping with each post. be sure to block the entire pose and mass lightly and loosely before drawing the final lines. one thing im seeing is that your figures sometimes has unequal limbs and on odd slants. just somethings to watch out for. keep it up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kuroart View Post
    the studies seem to be helping with each post. be sure to block the entire pose and mass lightly and loosely before drawing the final lines. one thing im seeing is that your figures sometimes has unequal limbs and on odd slants. just somethings to watch out for. keep it up.
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    nice studies! some of them are a bit stiff, but theyr good! keep em coming!

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    gonna keep em coming i still havent studied leg anatomy yet

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    hey good stuff but...
    your last picture the forshortining is off, i had this problem too but if you have a reference just pay attention to the size of the leg and you will see that the size you drew and the size in the reference are different so change it to match

    if you drew from your head ..to bad next time draw from reference it helps a lot.
    it looks like you have a Hogarth book (from the style you've draw) and in his books he has a lot of foreshortened body's so try to use them as a ref

    hope that helps
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    sry for the tiny post

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    I like the stylized human form and all, but some of your drawings tend to throw out function for form. why not work on some life studies instead, just to get a better understanding of anatomy, motion, etc.

    and I noticed that your faces are quite nice in profile but tend to be of lesser quality from a frontal view. might want to work on that.

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    Thanks for stopping by my SB.
    Some things that have helped me are those anatomy studies you are doing, plus skeletal studies and how the muscles connect to them. And you can also draw characters out of the poses too. I usually draw the pose and then look up pictures of people in that pose. It's a good excercise for in between times if you get bored with just the anatomy studies. Keep it up!

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    been doodling n studyin a little its my goal to do more

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    Wow, you've been busy!

    There's not much I can suggest, you seem to be taking all the right steps, just keep it up and you'll find yourself improving as you go

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    The first picture you posted is from Figure Drawing Without A Model, since you said you don't remember where it came from.

    Anyway, keep drawing!

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    i need more info on everything

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    found and feeling it i need advice and LOTS OF IT

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