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    OTTA's SKETCH! PLEASE COME AND GIVE ME SOME CRITS :)

    HI GUYS!

    I'm new here and i'd like to say hello to everyone. At first i'm an architect but i love to see good stuffs in here, so now, i wanna make my own too!. So, for improve my own skill continously, i decide to make this sketch for makin my own inspiration and a pressure for myself to working hard!

    I really wanna get some crits from all you guys, i'll be very appreciate for every comments

    Thank You For comin.

    PS. I'm sorry for my english, it's a bit strange , i've to apologize for that!
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    Natural Elemental Rage : When nature show it's anger!
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    Da GENESH'S SKETCH

    GANESH is one of a hindu god, i paint in a difference way

    The Younger one! and as a Egytian Heirogryphic Picture
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    C.O.W of this week - THE SOUND!

    "HORN CROWN KING CROC"
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    This is my new sketch, i do it for Art crusade. Please give me some advices or crits. I feel i'm very weak in a light&shade of overall picture. Thank for comin!
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    like your stuff.
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    For the final, ART CRUSADE : THE RETURN OF THE LORD
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    Your work definitely has a very solid feel to it. The colors are very earthy. You might try to work on your perspective a bit. For instance, the King Croc's jaw looks a little bit strange.

    Cool sketchbook, keep it up!
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    Thank you meganite, I try to dig up my perspective & drawing skill which I haven't use for many years. I'll keep sharing my sketch, Keep in touch. Thanks man!
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    This week C.O.W - STRANGED WALK

    I got an idea from a rowed boat that can moove forward by crossing the paddle,This is the same it move a pair of legs in the crossing way to make it forward. I've inspire from an Octopus (agian LOL), To be a land shelled mollusk with a lot of tentacles. Their tentacles is like a whip, It's tough,It fast and it can be used as a leg too when they needed

    a tentacles are in process of think,I'm not sure about adding some hand at the tentacles to make more useful to this or just a tentacles with a sucker node as usual.

    Any advice?
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    You're natural element paintings are verry cool. Colors are great and they have a great vivid feel to them.
    I think you should try to put some more of that 'feeling' into your other paintings. (like the 2 gods, they are a bit flat). You're painting of the return of the lord is pretty cool to but a bit chaotic.

    Cool work, keep posting :p
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    My advice would be more sketches/doodles and do it everyday, cause after 2 or 3 days you must have long warms up before taking some serious work.

    So keep up working&posting.
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