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    Some kind of assassin! WIP

    Yes, no, maybe?

    Allright, so I began drawing this rough sketch some time ago and then decided to add some details.

    Now I would really appreciate some input on this one. Been staring at it for a long time and I'm kind of lost. What's good, and perhaps more importantly, what's bad?

    Thanks /Jakob

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    Hi Jakob,

    I'd say that she could need some more shadows and highlights, especially her suit and her hair. (Probably you wanted to add them anyways,... ^^; )
    And well, her thigh seems to be a bit too long in the knee area. I think you could round up and flatten her knee a bit (a bit hard to describe) and work on the lower leg, too.

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    You're absolutely right about the shadows/highlights. It's something I work with constantly. And yea, the lower part of the image needs more work, I havn't really gotten to it yet. I also recognize that there is some issues with her knee, but I never really was clear on what it was. I will try to make it less pointy

    I realize just now that the hair lacks any kind of lighting, and that's why it looks like it's not part of the image. I will make an attempt to fix that.



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