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    Destruction

    This is a work in progress. My first attempt at doing destruction.
    Im not sure about the octopus on the building. I dont think it works well so far.
    Any ideas? thank you

    ps: I would like to upload the original photograph of the city. How do I upload two images here?

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    Hm.. not too sure about the octopus. It seems like he's floating on top of the whole picture, rather than being in it. At first I didn't recognise it as one either, more like something orange and then at a closer look I saw the tentacles. And I'm wondering.. what is his story being there?

    Also, I'm not sure what the big white/greyish spot in the building is below the octopus. To me it appears almost like a sheet of glass pasted on the wall. For destruction it's awfully light.

    It being awfully light could go for the whole image I suppose. Of course it's never needed to make a night scene and make it pitchblack in order to dramatise the destruction, but even with the clouds as they are it all appears to be rather sunny and happy Speaking of which.. in the original, are the clouds this way? It's really overcast and I'm noticing quite some sunlight on the city. Also the octopus is oddly lit compared to the sky.

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    Thank you very much. No I changed the sky. You are right It does not look like it belongs there. Im going to try fixing it. I have a lot more to work on. thanks for the feedback!

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    Edited

    Made some changes.

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    Original

    Here is the actual photograph

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    Destruction2

    I got some more feedbacks. Made some more changes

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    Put the octopus in the sky, make it BIGGER ! and have it's tentacles shoot lightning and swing around knocking down buildings and picking up cars and throwing them around ! woot ! it would be like the thundirbird, but instead it would be the Thunderoctopus.

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