Last edited by j.s. sabastian; February 27th, 2009 at 04:48 AM.
I can't really figure out what the heck is going on here. much more definition and more solid shading needed.
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i don't get it. ones pretty much a black sillihoute. and the others wearing golden armour...but aperently things are not defined enough.....sorrywill work on it more tonight...
ok so i realized that every thing was all jaked up so i made changes and decided to add a sense of battle in the backround..;.wich makes me even more confused now....damn!
I like your alien-like shading, looks great. I echo that just a bit more clarification as to what is going on might help. Maybe just tighten up the edges. Great ribbing shade!
That is a VERY busy piece, but an interesting action scene! It needs to calm down a little. Too much black flattens depth. There is no atmosphere between the foreground characters and the ones in the back. Work a little more on proportions too before going into the details.
Nice updates, keep it up!
rist.....thank you....i definetly agree is too buisy....i origanily did this for dsg under title-robot love- but some how it has evovled into something else i'll probably turn it to grey scale and re-vamp. as far as going into preporsotions over detial...i'm trying trust me
gms don't know the time schedeul last night i didn't drink....i sleppt instead....will update tonight.. promise
nemia. thank you for responding for some reason in the dgitil world i suck at edges
it will get there i hope.....