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    Exclamation Need Critique For Life Drawings!!!

    Here are some of the drawings i've done, they include 5 min. gesture poses & 25 min. life drawing poses.

    i want to know if i'm headed in the right direction, & whatever else i could do to improve the quality of my work.

    i hope u enjoy...

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    try some andrew loomis book.

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    andrew loomis will do! thanx for the reference!

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    Your gesture drawings seem terribly anorexic. I want to eat a cheeseburger after looking at them. Also, your lines seem a bit pointed as well. However that's more of a aesthetic critique, and has no real bearnig on your skill. In fact your doing really well, especially in your life drawing.

    Biggest critique I can offer is to continue doin what your doing, but keep in mind proportions a bit more. In some of the pictures the head appears either too small or too rounded, or in the case of the second still life, appears a bit disjointed connecting to the shoulders and neck muscles.

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