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    Maximo V. Lorenzo Sketches

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    I forgot to update this thing, haha how silly of me.

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    hey maxim; nice comic there. the angles really dynamic and work great in the fight. the intro is good too. I'd have made a little bit more room for the first fruit appearing. let it be at the end of the page. and give the brother a little more time to take out his violin. I kindof missed the making fruits part the first time reading, so I didnt get any after that and had to start over.
    there's also some sentences that are a little wacky. like 'this town right here I am going to smash that stupid guitar.'
    maybe, 'today I'm going to smash that stupid..", or, "right here in this town,.."
    and at the end. "I burn out like as a white hot flame".. just drop the 'as'.
    anyway, great to see more sequential work here; that's what we've been missing, and that's what we wanna see more off at the storyboard ring. hope to see more of you!

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    Thanks for the critique and comments, You know I think I actually took out the "as" and forgot to upload the edit.

    That storyboarding circle sounds JUST the thing I want to get into.

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    I can't wait till they meet again!!!

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    ^^ great! sign up in the ring from my sig pls. it'll be fun.

    >>SKETCHBOOK. you'll visit me. I'll visit you, we'll have a tea party. with arts and shit. it'll be dreamy. stop by.
    >>mah tumbr
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    Ooogh, I been pretty busy this winter.































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    Lovely works.In the first some character sketches are in less quality(seems like anatomy false in the arm holding the guitar) than the brilliant background work.I am talking only about deep detailes, in general its all damn good
    keep up

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    Well it's been almost a year, I wonder if anyone thinks I've gotten better













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    I'm up over at ZUDA.COM as OHKO http://www.zudacomics.com/node/1562
    if your interested in sentai/shonen/manga this might be for you, if you loathe all those things, well you might not want to bother, haha.

    Anyway I'm garnering all the votes I can muster, because this really is a tough battle. Take care and thank you for your time!

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    Cool to see you here in the sketchbook section!
    I like your character designs. Would love to see more !!

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    Thanks for dropping by! I wish I had time to flesh out character work, it's pretty dash and go for me.

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    Great little Tezuka-but-not-really element in your style. Usually when I see manga online I end up rolling my eyes and moving on to the next image, but there's something really great about yours that just has a nice charm to it.

    Take on more anatomy studies and work on foundations a bit, you've got the makings of a promising art style here man, looking forward to seeing you develop it further.

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    Blighted Art is right, I think some anatomy and perspective studies are needed. However, I do like your color choices.

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    Right on! thanks for swinging by guys!!

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