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    debris

    I wanted to do more with, the back ground but I sorta got stuckbut yet and still, let me knnow what you think of it.

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    It looks a little as if you were trying to play it a bit too safe regarding the pose.

    I know that some angles are difficult to render but the piece seems all together too stiff. The hover bike(I'm assuming) is a little too 2d, and awkwardly close to the road

    it looks as if he/she was any closer he/she would be at serious risk of road rash "] of course i suppose that would be my last concern if i were being shot at but i regress, my point is a valid one "]

    I hope i helped a little at least

    Oh! and you should start a sketchbook for sure! you have good potential.

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