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    Dolls

    This is my first time EVER doing a macabre piece... I wanted some helpful pointers and suggestions on how to make it really pop

    The short story: The doll at the bottom center of the picture was actually a human. But the three dolls surrounding her turned her into a doll and plan to keep her there forever and ever as their plaything.

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    I took the web off and also the white 'fluff' on the tarantulas it make them look weird.
    Last edited by Micca; September 17th, 2008 at 07:51 AM. Reason: Editing picture
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    Hi

    The spiderweb over the whole image is rather confusing. I first thought there were just lines all over the piece. I'd say take that out.
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    I changed it up a little, what do you think?
    Last edited by Micca; September 17th, 2008 at 07:52 AM.
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