Thanks for stopping by my sketchbook, and welcome to CA!
You have a good start here, and you've already collected good tips on Loomis' books from MyOrangeHat, so I'd suggest you follow that advice as soon as possible since it will help you out a lot! =)
Other than that, I notice that you seem to "pet" in your line.
That's a bad habit that you probably want to get rid of, so try to put down a line with a single stroke.
This thread can probably help you out when you're trying to find the proper lineweight
If you have any questions, or if you want an explanation for something: always feel free to ask =)
Keep up the great work!
ReviseTheMethod - DefiledVisions - wookiedabo
"Overwhelmed as one would be, placed in my position.
Such a heavy burden now to be the One
Born to bear and bring to all the details of our ending,
To write it down for all the world to see.
That's some really nice fabric in the latest one. I must admit folds in fabric have always given me trouble, but you seem to have no issue with them. Nice job.
"This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy." -Douglas Adams
nice progress. your cats beautiful! the only thingy i wanna crit about is: do more. just dont settle for 3 drawings, do 6, or smth. even if its just your hand, your face in the mirror, or the box that you have your pencils in.
hellooooo! damn! AMAZING progress in just 2 pages! (or one, whatever ) Last gestures really stand out from the rest. Also like the fractal stuff. I am intrigued ^_^ come on, post the tempera stuff! Cheers!