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    Hey there!
    Thanks for stopping by my sketchbook, and welcome to CA!

    You have a good start here, and you've already collected good tips on Loomis' books from MyOrangeHat, so I'd suggest you follow that advice as soon as possible since it will help you out a lot! =)

    Other than that, I notice that you seem to "pet" in your line.
    That's a bad habit that you probably want to get rid of, so try to put down a line with a single stroke.

    This thread can probably help you out when you're trying to find the proper lineweight

    If you have any questions, or if you want an explanation for something: always feel free to ask =)

    Keep up the great work!
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    Thank you, I shall study more, because I'm not sure I have understood correctly what you've told me
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    That's some really nice fabric in the latest one. I must admit folds in fabric have always given me trouble, but you seem to have no issue with them. Nice job.
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    homework second part
    Last edited by silverrspells; December 6th, 2008 at 06:14 PM.
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    Homework third (and also the last) part.
    I'm not very satisfied with it.

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    hey, that last one's alright, I can't see why you don't like it. you're doin well, more studies.
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    It's been a looong time
    Critics and feedback more than welcomed
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    Back with some others...
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    Hi
    Some really nice studies in your last post. The limbs are still a little stiff, try making the lines more fluid and it'll be great. Definite improvement.

    Cheers
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    nice progress. your cats beautiful! the only thingy i wanna crit about is: do more. just dont settle for 3 drawings, do 6, or smth. even if its just your hand, your face in the mirror, or the box that you have your pencils in.
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    Old stuff I forgot to post.
    I finally came at peace with tempera. I shall post the evidence, later.
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    hellooooo! damn! AMAZING progress in just 2 pages! (or one, whatever ) Last gestures really stand out from the rest. Also like the fractal stuff. I am intrigued ^_^ come on, post the tempera stuff! Cheers!
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