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    searching for the light.. did you saw it?

    hi, folks!
    I'm mark, 22 years old from near Berlin, Germany. and i need to pimp my art skills!

    Enough said, here is my Butt, time to kick it .
    Thanks!

    EDIT: i decided not to upload every single crappy piece, cause i dont want to bore you guys that much

    here is my wurzel-manikin project. click one page further for the whole illustration.
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    Heya, interesting creature concepts you have there.. As for crits.. For the cyborg alien I guess you could tighten up the rendering a bit, cause the general impression I get is all the forms are rather soft.. Not a big deal in the metal/inorganic bits, but for the flesh there would often be some fine and sharp specular highlights, as well as defined shadows in crease areas.. Cool start tho, let's see more!
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    Looks promising! Agree with the softness though. But it might be that the image is simply low-resolution?
    And please use smaller images that don't require scrolling and kills the page layout! Like this:
    [image removed, no longer needed. Thanks!]
    Bonus: the softness is gone! I like this smaller version a lot more.
    Last edited by Jasper Flick; September 14th, 2008 at 05:01 PM. Reason: example image is now a duplicate and needs to go
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    Good stuff keep it up

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    Welcome to CA!

    I don't know how long you've been drawing for but you're on the right track, keep it up.

    Here's a bit of info that may help ya out:

    You're anatomy is, well I'm not gonna lie to you, quite the ways off. No worries though, here are a couple of books that are helping me out alot: "Drawing for All it's Worth" by Andrew Loomis (amazing book) I'll tell you now though, that book has been out of print for a while so it's near impossible to find but with a little web-searching, you may be able to download it. Another good book, "Complete Guide to Drawing From Life" by Bridgman. I haven't really gotten into that one (i don't know why and I'm beating myself up for it) but it's just as amazing as the Andrew Loomis one. Oh, and of course the Burne Hogarth books are great as well. Then, the mother of all books, "Atlas of Human Anatomy for the Artist" by Stephen Rogers Peck. Be careful when search for that one 'cause there are alot of "Atlas of Anatomy" books out there but none as helpful as this one. The cover has...I'll just show you:

    http://books.google.com/books?hl=en&...result#PPP1,M1

    (I don't even know if what I just did is even legal) sshhhh...don't tell anyone.

    You're concepts are cool but "...before you can begin to distort the form you need to understand it first, other wise it won't make sense...". A professor of mine told me that once. hehe, and now I'm passin down the knowledge.

    ...and I'll leave ya with that. That in itself is a good 2-3 months of work and study. Trust me, read those books and practice ALOT and you'll begin to see improvement within the first month alone. There's a butt-ton of other books but I have to go to work so time is precious. WORK HARD!
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    hi there
    i finally got my scanner to work and realized that i probably have the badest existing machine on earth. hm...

    anyways here is some stuff.. on the last pose i used an antomy chart a bit. i'm not satisfied with my anatomic skill from head at all! the rest is from my mind. anatomy is hard to learn for me but somehow i have fun with it..
    thanks for spending your time on this lowquality scanns (and drawings)..
    goals for my self: especially improve arms, hands, feet; !!!start to render !!! (i'm using 6b pencil any suggestions?); draw women; line confidence..
    critz more than welcome.
    cheers..
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    here is kind of a finished painting (from the thumb) i did a few months ago.. i don't like the comp color anymore but naah it was my second attemp using photoshop.. thanks for spending the time
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    he, i could somewhat relate to your story, i try to get back into drawing atm too. you have many interesting and creative designs going, i like the last scribble where you add different legs to the same upper body - nice trick! i think what holds you back is some lack of anatomy. for example the muscles on the last guy look very pasted on.
    keep working!
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    thanks for visiting my sketchbook and your kind words katinki. you're totally right bout the anatomy of the last guy. anatomy is pretty hard for me but i ll do my best to pimp my skills. cool to here that i'm not alone with my drawing story . but we ll handle that, if not me than you will .

    here are three quick random poses from my head (argh they really suck) and a more time expensive one. take care
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    here is the guy with to swords again. whenever i try to do any dynamic poses i end up with a boring standing something. are there any tips, tricks recources for dynamic figures? i always seem to fail :/.
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    its me again. i'm starting to get comfortable with crazy doodeling and seeing poses in the mixture of shapes and lines. hmm we will see.
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    today i gave the dodge/burn tool a try. really nice tool. ~2h for both (way too long ) cheers
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    the cave creature digital painting is really good, looks pro!
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