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Page one finished!
Last edited by bpatrick; March 5th, 2009 at 03:02 AM.
very cool, post more!
Thanks! I'm workin' on it.
Behind you man...
what's so special about this girl that no one noticed blond in her panties?
Ha! - You're the second person to mention the panties. They're supposed to be really short shorts - maybe they shouldn't be white. No one notices her because Camilla's that hot.
Yes maybe blue, like they are jeans.
O yeah... Camilla's is hot. Must be the ass...
Nice drawings... Waiting for more... I wonder what happens in elevator later....
Cool. Looks like something you might see in Mad Magazine's comic strip section. My only crit: cut down on the number of lines you use on her, especially in the hair and face-- the lines on her nose in panel six make her look older and more wrinkly, and I don't think the straw-like hair works with this smooth, clean style.
@hhorbec: It's gotta be!
@Angroc: Thanks! One of the least weird comics I've done I think -- and it's still pretty weird.
@eminkey2003: Thanks! You're right about the face and hair - I try to keep it simple and clean - lines sneak in there.
@Calcaneus: Thanks! I'm working on page 2!
Me likes booty, matey!
second page finished!
Really nice. Gestures and stylized anatomy is all fantastic.
Only crit is that I would flip the last panel, since you've got that guy running to the left in the fifth panel.
pages 3 & 4
and some other stuff