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Page one finished!
Last edited by bpatrick; March 5th, 2009 at 03:02 AM.
very cool, post more!
Thanks! I'm workin' on it.
Behind you man...
what's so special about this girl that no one noticed blond in her panties?
Yes maybe blue, like they are jeans.
O yeah... Camilla's is hot. Must be the ass...
Nice drawings... Waiting for more... I wonder what happens in elevator later....
Cool. Looks like something you might see in Mad Magazine's comic strip section. My only crit: cut down on the number of lines you use on her, especially in the hair and face-- the lines on her nose in panel six make her look older and more wrinkly, and I don't think the straw-like hair works with this smooth, clean style.
@hhorbec: It's gotta be!
@Angroc: Thanks! One of the least weird comics I've done I think -- and it's still pretty weird.
@eminkey2003: Thanks! You're right about the face and hair - I try to keep it simple and clean - lines sneak in there.
@Calcaneus: Thanks! I'm working on page 2!
Me likes booty, matey!
second page finished!
Really nice. Gestures and stylized anatomy is all fantastic.
Only crit is that I would flip the last panel, since you've got that guy running to the left in the fifth panel.
pages 3 & 4
and some other stuff