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September 13th, 2008 #1
Camilla Barnes - Hottest Girl (update and others)
Page one finished!
Last edited by bpatrick; March 5th, 2009 at 03:02 AM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberSeptember 13th, 2008 #2
very cool, post more!
September 15th, 2008 #3
Thanks! I'm workin' on it.
September 15th, 2008 #4
Behind you man...
what's so special about this girl that no one noticed blond in her panties?
September 15th, 2008 #5
September 16th, 2008 #6
Yes maybe blue, like they are jeans.
O yeah... Camilla's is hot. Must be the ass...
Nice drawings... Waiting for more... I wonder what happens in elevator later....
September 16th, 2008 #7
September 16th, 2008 #8
Cool. Looks like something you might see in Mad Magazine's comic strip section. My only crit: cut down on the number of lines you use on her, especially in the hair and face-- the lines on her nose in panel six make her look older and more wrinkly, and I don't think the straw-like hair works with this smooth, clean style.
September 18th, 2008 #9
September 19th, 2008 #10
@hhorbec: It's gotta be!
@Angroc: Thanks! One of the least weird comics I've done I think -- and it's still pretty weird.
@eminkey2003: Thanks! You're right about the face and hair - I try to keep it simple and clean - lines sneak in there.
@Calcaneus: Thanks! I'm working on page 2!
September 23rd, 2008 #11
Me likes booty, matey!
October 21st, 2008 #12
second page finished!
October 21st, 2008 #13
Really nice. Gestures and stylized anatomy is all fantastic.
Only crit is that I would flip the last panel, since you've got that guy running to the left in the fifth panel.