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    SB>> My own Way *** Hope to Improve

    Hello my Name is Rene, i´m 19 and i want to find my own way to draw.

    I want to kidnap the people from there ordinary day with my art.
    i hope can improve here ^^

    thx for watch

    (sry my englsich is bad i´m a german boy)

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    i draw today more ^^
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    here are some updates ^^

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    SB>> My own Way *** Hope to Improve i draw this pic @ school xD ^^

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    Hi!
    Lineworks looks strong on the faces but weaker on the full bodies. It's like you're less experienced with full figures but spent a lot of time drawing manga faces. I would suggest to work on full bodies and not just stylized facial features, you can do those already. Check out Loomis's books, they're worth it and available online.

    If you want to find your own way to draw I recommend dropping the manga influence for a while and try to draw realistic people.
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    okay thx ^^
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    SB>> My own Way *** Hope to Improve

    here i wanted to draw a hero of my favorite book forgetton realms the third son
    drizzt *.*
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    Hmmm... As Jasper Flick allready said, you schould try to draw realistic first. The books of Adrew Loomis are a good choice to start with.
    You have to keep in mind, that manga is a verry simplified and stylized way to draw. Before you start simplifing you have to understand what exactly you are going to simplify. Don't you agree with me on that point? Because otherwise you will have great struggle to develop a decent style of your own.
    In the last of your drawings, for example, the left arm of Drizzt looks somehow broken. You see?
    Let me help you with a homework: Try to draw a simplified skeleton, doing exactly the same pose that your Drizzt does.
    I will check back every day.

    cu!
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    okay i do it ^^
    and i can agree with you that manga is a simple stil but i like it because the difficult in mangas ara the storys ^^

    i do the homework today
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    SB>> My own Way *** Hope to Improve

    i hope its okay XDD its embarassing XD whatever ^^

    sry when it isn work out enough
    my time is limited .... sry sry sry....
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    Good work on that skeleton. Keep it up!
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    okay thx ^^
    should practise more with it `?
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    Always keep practicing.
    The skeleton's good! The crux might be adding the bulk to it. Can you add convincing bulk to that skeleton so it becomes a better Drizzt? Oh and first the nude only, add clothing only after you get the body right.
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    Yeah sry i cant say the right way in englishím bad with it
    i practise every day ^^

    Yeah but this pic was only a moment of fun i dont thought i can become an
    real picture
    but i can ^^
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    here are some new stuff

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