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    Short Film - "Dominos"

    Rescently, I uploaded my newest short film made entirely by myself in Maya.
    Check it out and tell me what you guys think.
    http://ogig.blogspot.com/
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    Thank you.

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    Hmmm the animation of the looks fine except when it jumps from the cliff...you have given an anticipation that prepares people for a huge jump but instead it just drops down like i just disappeared. On all the other fronts...good work m8...

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    Ah that’s cute! The weight shifts are too few and a bit too stiff. Don’t hesitate to move your character’s feet around as we tend to do that constantly. Take yourself as a reference and you’ll notice
    Nice facial expression on your protagonist there, but you could’ve pushed his emotion in his body language furthermore, even in a tight shot. The body’s your foundation and the face the confirmation, exaggeration or lie of what the character is feeling/expressing.
    Can’t wait for the next!

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    thanks guys, i see what you are saying, great crits

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