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Thread: Short Film - "Dominos"
September 7th, 2008 #1
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Hmmm the animation of the looks fine except when it jumps from the cliff...you have given an anticipation that prepares people for a huge jump but instead it just drops down like i just disappeared. On all the other fronts...good work m8...
September 9th, 2008 #3
Ah that’s cute! The weight shifts are too few and a bit too stiff. Don’t hesitate to move your character’s feet around as we tend to do that constantly. Take yourself as a reference and you’ll notice
Nice facial expression on your protagonist there, but you could’ve pushed his emotion in his body language furthermore, even in a tight shot. The body’s your foundation and the face the confirmation, exaggeration or lie of what the character is feeling/expressing.
Can’t wait for the next!
September 22nd, 2008 #4
thanks guys, i see what you are saying, great crits
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