You're off to a great start; Very impressive, especially considering you're just starting out. Lots of potential here, keep it up and you'll be a pro in no time.
My only critique would be to use a darker mid-tone to start with, and don't be afraid to push your hues more (try using a different color for the highlights, and a different one for the shadows.) Keep it going!
Man, if you're only 18 and this good already and "trying to learn digital painting" as you say. You're doing a darn good job and i would say you have a very bright future ahead of you. Seriously.. keep it up (and keep it real).
Those fruit studies look great. I think of all of them the banana looks best, while the pear for some reason is my least favorite of the three. It's great that you are studying so much. i don't really have much to crit, i just think its really cool how diverse your sketchbook already is. Keep it up.
"I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain."
--- Frank Herbert, Dune - Bene Gesserit Litany Against Fear
Check out my Sketchbook! Critique and Criticism welcomed.
One thing I really messed up with the pear was the spacing and positioning of the dots. They don't converge at the edges of the pear, and I think it made the whole thing seem flattened and two dimensional.
Anyway, some more gestures and sketching around...
Your gesture drawings are extremely impressive to say the least. I do have some advice when studying environments, however; If you're using references, make sure you choose photos that have a strong value statement and a sense of depth. Otherwise your studies will look flat, which is the case here. Go lighter as you go towards the background, with less saturated tones and less contrast all around. The opposite applies as you proceed towards the foreground; Use darker shades, more saturated tones, and increase the contrast. That should do the trick
Overall, you're doing great, and I look forward to more of your progress.
Portrait painting is very different than environment painting, so I wouldn't compare the two. You have to be very careful with values when it comes to landscapes, so I recommend just starting off with greyscale for now, and concentrate on colors later.
I did a quick paint over of one of your pieces to show you what I mean, I hope you don't mind:
lilnebo: Thanks, I'm gonna do some PS studies of figures from photos once I get a little bit better.
katinki: The environments are all referenced, and I feel like I'm hitting and missing with them so far. I liked the reference photo for the last one but it felt muddy and blurry when I was working on it. Subtlety can be a strain on the eyes lol.
The gestures are looking good. You've got a pretty firm grasp of the figure from what I can see, but as you said, your foreshortening needs work on some of the pieces. Your environment studies are coming along nicely, and I can see a lot of potential in them. Perhaps try a cityscape or two so that you get a feel for man-made landscapes as well as organic ones. Other than that, just keep going.
Hell yeah! thanks for dropping by again. Man your enviors have a great feeling about them. The last one could use a brighter sky though. Your studies are also really kickass.
All your lifestudies will, in the end, give you something very valuable. Knowledge about how things work - how colours mix together - where joints are located, how an arm really looks like etc.
and all this knowledge attained by studying will help you draw from imagination.. I'd really like to see some more imaginary work by you.
Your progress is great, you see much more comfortable with environments now. Your gesture studies are amazing, almost flawless. Keep it up!
Thanks, especially for the environment advice. I feel a lot more confident now, with environments and just Photoshop in general.
Erobern: Thanks, I think I might hit the books again and go back over muscle and bones.. and heads... and feet etc
I'm back at uni now, so I have less time to draw. At the very least, I'll keep doing the 50 gestures a week, hopefully I won't get too swamped during the year.
Might as well post the "finished" version of the bird. I planned for it to be a lot more refined, but now I just kinda want to move on to something else. I feel like I improved again though, I had surprisingly few problems rendering the bird. Hopefully my Photoshop skills will be as good as my pencil soon...
great stuff! your posemaniac figure studies look pretty perfect! i nearly start to ask myself why you continue doing them? what do you want to get out of them? i'd wish you would push yourself out of your comfort zone and tried something different!
and the crow looks awesome, too!