Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: Critique wanted

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Post Critique wanted

    Any would be appreciated! It's a foresty area with my character "Straws" the scarecrow holding a leetle mouse. Thanks in advance.

    Attachment 455251

  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Oct 2006
    Thanked 458 Times in 338 Posts
    You might want to add some more detail in the foreground to separate it from the bg.


  4. #3
    Join Date
    May 2006
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Firstly the sun is rather small. That's easily remedied. I'd recommend making the line you've used to define the mountain range lighter. Tonally it should be something that's only 25% black or thereabouts. Ideally lighter than the sky immediately above it anyway.

    As for the foreground, the grass nearest the trees is more defined than the grass nearer the scarecrow. That's something that needs addressing too.

    You could also add light lines to the nearest fence where the sun would be hitting it.

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Center of the Universe -- CT!
    Thanked 1,963 Times in 1,246 Posts
    Hi and this is cute, your character is being over powered by the big fence in the middle and the scene it's self. He needs to be more defined, very blurry and muddy right now - focus on this little chap first then on the scene - Hope this helps - I would lose that extra fence or cut it down in size also I would either move the little guy back or add more foreground so he does not get lost and is more of the focal point... K

Similar Threads

  1. Critique wanted
    By Danny91 in forum Art Critique Center
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: July 10th, 2012, 03:28 PM
  2. Critique wanted!
    By Littlelacedress in forum Art Critique Center
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: November 18th, 2011, 03:27 AM
  3. Critique wanted
    By DaniSantos in forum Art Critique Center
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: August 4th, 2011, 04:33 AM
  4. Critique wanted
    By kittydakitsune in forum Art Critique Center
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: February 16th, 2010, 05:44 PM
  5. Critique wanted please!
    By WhiteWingedDemon in forum Art Critique Center
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: December 20th, 2009, 10:35 PM

Members who have read this thread: 1


Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts

Developed Actively by the makers of the Best Amazon Podcast