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    yOU wAIT fOR mE! nEW pIECE!

    What do ya think?
    Last edited by WilliamLK; September 3rd, 2008 at 11:30 AM.

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    Could you sort out the title? Mixed cases look horrible.

    I’ve been thinking about your pictures and I think your naïve art would be great as postcards and prints instead of just a painting. Maybe that could come later. The pink’s nice and I’m not a pink kind of person.

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    I'm not digging on this one compositionally - the right side is really heavy(larger tree and really dark figure) while the other side feels empty.

    The eye is drawn to the figure, but there's no line to encourage the eye to move anywhere else in the piece.

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