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    My Finished Piece

    cthulu-esque piece I call "No More Air"
    if this is your first night, you have to fight.

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    -Inspired by Jason Chan, no doubt?
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    I don't think the girl needs the ONLY defined edge in the composition. Her silhouette is framed nicely with the contrast you've painted in and quite frankly I feel like my contact lense fell out when I look at the majority of this image. Too soft, but with understandable intent--

    just an opinion, as always.
    "She took the ice cube trays out of the freezer. What kind of a sick bitch takes the ice cube trays out of the freezer?"

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    oh yes! I forgot to credit Jason! I saw him do something similar in Seattle, and that inspired the concept here! thanks Jason!

    and yea, i was going for a feeling of the tentacles constantly slithering forward, hence the blur, but i think i should try to resolve that issue, because it does just seem out of focus
    if this is your first night, you have to fight.

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