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August 25th, 2008 #1
still pushing myself.
Hi there guys. now I know it's far from the best digital artwork we have all seen but I am quite proud of this one and had a blast drawing and colouring it. Pencil - Scanned - coloured in PS. Was just looking for some C+C please if you have a few seconds. Thanks Luke
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Lurve some of the coloring, solid ideas.
He's got a REALLY tiny head, boobies, and a gigantic forearm and wrist.
The closer you get to 'right' anatomy (as you are) the more glaring inconsistencies become.
August 26th, 2008 #3
what happened to his left arm? it should either show in the left side or right side, it cannot be hidden behind him because of his position. At first i thought it was part of the chest. Also the two hipbone lines do not work there. You can have only ONE as his torso is shifted, and it should be a few steps to the right of the diamond thing on the belt. Increase head size as it is WAAY too small. The leg position is fine although meh it would be more natural if you shift the legs. Study up on anatomy before going digital
hope this helps.Progressive work: www.paolocogliati.blogspot.com
August 26th, 2008 #4
Dragon and kungfu boy ,cool~except that arm ,the shape is good ,but the color and the shadow u didn't express well.so ~keep practicing.ur picture will become very good in a few days
Last edited by M Jin; August 26th, 2008 at 12:09 PM.
August 26th, 2008 #5
MiniGoth - Thanks for the comments mate really gave me a buzz to go and do some late night drawing.
5coop- Thanks for the constructive feedback. Always nice to get some sound advice. I will continue my anatomy studying and try to progress.
M Jin - I will keep practising my friend aslong as you keep giving me some feedback
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