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    I haven`t really used this place, but IŽd be thankful for any crit and suggestion (even redline) for this. Pretty speedpaint-ish, but don`t let it distract you.

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    He's so cute!

    I don't mind the reddish outline, but there's really no corresponding shadow area on his front.

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    Cool! I also like the red outline.
    I really like the sky

    Some shadows/highlights are very soft, maybe add a little more contrast on those places? (especially hat and coat)

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