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    Caught Yellow Handed

    This is a T-shirt design I intend to try on threadless.com
    Crit please!
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    getting caught yellow handed is better than getting caught brown handed in a restroom with no toilet paper.

    wheres the weapon?

    J.L. ALFARO


    "Be who you are and say what you feel,because those that mind don't matter and those that matter don't mind."
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    Thanks, added gun


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    I have a very cramped sense of composition, but I think I'd move the two closer to each other. Maybe even overlapping -- for a t-shirt, you want a tight grouping in the center.

    Have you tried a version without giving the hotdog arms or legs? Imagining those little spindly things growing out of a weiner is a little disturbing. Saying "Put your hands up" to a creature that hasn't got any might be funnier.

    Or it might be less funny. But, you know...a thought.

    I *think* I'd make the end of the bricks ragged on either side, rather than straight. Again, trying to cluster the whole thing in a group a bit more.

    I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).
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    Thanks stoat!
    I did the brick thing and brought them closer together. I tired the overlapping but it just didn't look right

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    Yep, I think that's an improvement.

    Do they really print at the bottom edge of the T like that?

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