I feel that the sides of her helmet are a little too rough and could use some reworking to bring to the level of quality as the top of the helmet. The edge of the character in the lower right corner of the canvas doesn't feel right. Perhaps some more opaque painting could help?
Maybe its just me, but the outside edge of her right eye feels a little off. Her left eye is fantastic though.
IMO, the image is a little too zoomed in on the face. I would've shown a little more neck and indication of the shoulders to show off the pose and costumes.
Havoc-DM: Thanks for the crits, I appreciate your taking such a hard look at it! Regarding the edge of the helmet, I sort of thought it would look rough like that because of the uneven reflection of the sky. I'm just shooting from the hip, ya know
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