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    Arrow The lovers- Busted!

    An illustration I did to practice
    Was fun to do, because normally I do more ''concept art'' stuff, and I wanted to try something more illustrative

    Critics and comments greatly appreciated!

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    Wow! Creepy and beautiful. The forms get a little lost but I see what you're getting at. My other crit would be to make her arm thicker. Great work!

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    Beautifull work!

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    i like the dark mood it creates

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    Hawt! it feels very fleshy with nice shadows.

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    The way you handled the diffused light came out really well. The girl's arm is a bit thin, though, compared to the rest of her. You've also covered her mouth, so any expression she's meant to have needs to be articulated through her eyes and body language, and I think that comes across pretty well, still subtle and mysterious and makes you wonder about the whole thing, which to me is really nice.

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    I like the piece, first thing that came to my mind when i saw this was..."BUSTED!".

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    thanks everyone for the comments! I think I will do some tweaking there and there, especially to get sure that the anatomy is correct, but it's mostly considered final.



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    Can you tell me about them

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    Caught! That was my first thought. I think you conveyed the expressions of the pair really well.

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