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    cuckoo

    hi all,

    thanks this website, i learned a lot here. though, my english still bad, i can notice many great artist's technic and tried it my self.

    this is my new pic. comment r very welcome.

    cuckoo

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    I'd love to see some of those sharp foreground shapes to be made much darker, just to let my eye rest of that figure. His left -our right - leg seems like it should be pushed back a little. Also, his butt should be pushed back a bit too - and this would in turn push the lower part of his torso a bit further from us. The organic extrusion from his arm needs some core shadows - right now they're reading pretty flat.

    This is a really nice start. Thank you for sharing it.

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