Hey guys i just thought that i should introduce my self...My name is Alex and i live in Israel, i have lil time for drawing usually because i'm in the army now
(i hate this song...) i came to this forum to find some good critiques and to improve as much as i can so don't worry to be to harsh on me. Here are most of the pictures that i drew for the past few months, and some sketches...
i will update the thread as soon as i can, i hope it will be every week or so.
Anyway go to the last page for new stuff.
hope you like 'em most of the pictures where made for my friends.
Last edited by Fallenangel; April 29th, 2013 at 12:34 PM.
I like the pencil drawings, very detailed and nice.
You could always do some anatomy and facial studies though, there's a few problems here and there, but not bad! Great work.
For the digital ones, I think general practice will help you improve, there's some colour issues too, experiment a little
beautiful, pencil pieces. they show you're very patient, and have an eye for detail. :]
The only thing I see off in the finished ones are the proportions in your figures.
they are from months past, so they probably don't reflect your present knowledge of the human body, since your more recent sketches display a better understanding of it.
these are really nice. i like the rubiks cube one particularly!
your pencil stuff is much better than your colour work at the minute, but i'm sure that'll come with time and practice.
looking forward to seeing more from you.
Whoa, those are some detailed pencils! lol Very cool sketchbook so far, I must say I admire the patience you must have to achieve things like these. Crit wise, on the recent digital piece you did, you seemed to have shrunk the head of the figure as you rendered. Doing so threw off the proportions from the original sketch... not sure if you're completely done on the piece, but just something to watch out for next time. Otherwise I'd suggest studying a bit more on anatomy; your people look great, but they do seem to have some odd proportions here and there.
It's just a nickname, still too far from being one...
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The detailed pencil renderings work are simply stunny. Nice detailed and way to convey form. I have to agree with what has been said about the proportions in your figures, they need a bit more of work and attention. Though, from the first post they have improved a bit more. Just keep looking at the size relationships between the parts.
Also, I am with Onir on the last one, the head got a bit shrunk. But since it is done digitally, that won't be too much of a problem to fix. Either way, keep at it!
Gorgeous pencil work. I like the quick studies just as much as the more detailed, finished stuff.
A few before me have touched on the proportions critique, which I'd echo - particularly in the pencil rendering of the lady with the knife in the trees, and the one of the girl sitting "indian-style" and holding the gun. The rendering and shading is so beautifully done, but the "groundwork" of the anatomy/proportions undermine what would otherwise be a perfect sketch...
Is the fellow in the very first sketch of your first post looking so angry because you didn't draw his "nether parts?" Heheheheheh...
Great stuff in here and a great start to a sketchbook...post more!
jinok :Thank you, i have so much more to learn and i think the appreciation isn't the first thing i'm looking for here... i draw when i can and how i can, and not everyone has to like my stuff, or appreciate the work, i'm drawing for myself not for someone else.
here is the finished present picture...i will add a photo of my friend or something like that into it later.
Love and bullets...
A long time ago, although he loved her more than anything in this world, he made a terrible wrong to her and for that he damned himself to be her silent guardian till the end of time.
He is always by her side, hidden from her sight, protecting her with the help of his gun, but never allowed to touch her....