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    As promised, trying to update as soon as i can...

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    Last update for today...
    3 portrait studies...each took me about 25 min.

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    your hatching is wicked!

    try defining the outlines of the eyes with less pressure? That first guy looks like he's wearing eyeliner.
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    krysjez Thank you i'm just used to draw girls so thus the heavy outline...but i"ll try to not do it in the future...

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    Hey guys, these past few days where really crappy for me....tried to make some sketches and studies and worked a bit more on the witchblade picture, any crits/suggestions on it will be much appreciated.

    Alex.

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    todays version...any suggestions?
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    Her left hand (our right) makes her pose a little stiff. You did nice job with the design of her roboarm I like it. Only this spike is to long perhaps. BTW. Sorry for my todays english, let's say that I'm not in the shape ;P
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    Ok...i dunno what is it but it's supposed to be my very first color attempt directly on the sketch (15-20 min) ....too tired and frustrated over some home problems....going to bed.

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    Your pencil work is amazing! Nice confident lines.
    It seems to me that you have some difficulties when you draw faces in 3/4 view, sometimes you get it right but other times the side of the face isn't not wide enough.

    Today's updated version looks better, especially the face. I would suggest adding more spikes on her left shoulder, right now the right side looks a little empty. Also maybe slim the lower part of her upper left leg and move it a little inward, maybe this will solve the stiffness problem.
    Keep up the hard work!
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    Hey there,

    Took me some time to go through all your posts, however I really enjoyed it and from now on I will look for any of your new posts. The improvement is visible from page 1. Do belive you need to stick to pencil + paper rather than PS or coloured, your sketching is great; like the level of detail in some of your drawings.

    Only advice I can give is to try drawing things you normally belive you cannot, put characters in diferent situations, (like the comics you did).

    Hope you have time to check out my SB, I'm sort of new around here...

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    Is this a jet fighter in the background xD? Anyway values seems to be more less correct. Quite nice job for a 20 minutes draft.
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    Hey man nice progress. I know you can see issues in your color palate, but you're getting there. Proportions are also a little off, but that too takes time. Good luck.
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    cool work!, i like your style
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    Rustveld Thank you i know about the 3/4 face problem it's just something that i can't get right, i'll try to work some more on the painting and show you the results.

    dac Thanks, like i said in one of my posts here, at first i wanted to become a comicbook artist (and i still want) but these days i really want to learn painting cg/traditional.
    I know about the stiffness of my characters i really should put some more effort in to it.

    Ramalooke Yeap it's supposed to be some kind of space jet.... thanks

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    towy Thanks i try

    Here are some sketchy stuff and an update of the girl painting from today.
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