I think the hardest thing about the piece on the last page concerning the composition is the square format. It would help if you stretched out the image into more of a widescreen format. (For example: Extending the left side so that you can show what they're looking at) Just a suggestion though because I find square formats a bit harder to work with.
Keep it up! Especially the badass comic pencils
Danny_K Thanks for the feedback man, i know about the composition and the value problems...those are definitely things that i need to work on.
skMOP Thanks for the suggestion, i did it and i think it helped a lil
Lil update on the pic...
If you need any suggestions for composition, you should pick up Jason Manley's Composition tutorial and go to public places with your sketchbook and fill it up with only thmbnail sketches. Please check out my sketchbook and feel free to comment. I would greatly appreciate it.
Silent-samurai87 Thank you
dblock Thank you for the input.
I'm back to a daily updates...it's gonna end soon but as long as i have some time i listen to this crap UBER CRAPPPP and draw....
values from today...1, 2, 3...
and something different...
Hi mate, it was a while since I visited this place. I can see an improvement on your figures. They are definetly more dynamic and less stiff xd. Good job. And keep updating. You are one of those persons that keep me motivated so don't stop and keep pushing. Cheers! xD
Interesting face above... try doing the same thing with some real faces
Try drawing some folks from here on CA or really any other place that has faces...
Keep 'em coming!
And also, what's the brush look like? That looks similiar to just a basic round to me.
ur next post will be like
"couldn't leave it like that" or "couldn't sleep without some touch ups" XD
Danny_K Thanks mate i promise i"ll change it, when/if i"ll get back to that pic again
Creusa hhh...basically now i do only 4 things:
1. Tuning my car
2. Learning to play n a guitar
3. Learning Arabic
4. Drawing and painting
so yeah i have all the time in the world to redraw and redraw some more...however it all will end from this Sunday, and i"ll get back to a once a month update or even less...that's life
anyways here is a gray scale wip and an update on the caroony pic.
Awesome pencils as always mate! Beautiful job on the pink anatomy study a few post up. The values of your latest WIP are looking good, there's little too much cyan though, particularly on the face. Since there is a cool light source the cast shadows should be warmer, especially with the warm back-light.
Keep it up! I'll be having a look at the resource you provided, thanks!
Liking the cartoon drawing a whole lot. Nice colours on the last one too
Mat Kaminski Thank you i will
Rustveld I wish i've read your comment carefully before i worked today on the pic, oh well i"ll fix it later...thanks man
Ramalooke Thank you it helped a lot!
Sushy Thank you
Creusa spasibo gospoza
Danny_K Thanks man, i"m still gonna try and work as hard as i can it's just that i won't update as much...btw that stupid letter still didn't came...and i'm getting a bit nervous
Naidy Thank you i will
Here is a lil update on the witch girl and a pencil project that i've started... "The last Days of Io"....