Nicely done. But it has some issues that need to be fixed. First thing is her left hand, it's a bit off, and her left leg need to be reshaped, it's to small. I have the feeling that shadow she is casting should be fixed to. I really like the rendering, especially on her face, good work with this one. You could also consider adding some more atmosphere in front to push her figure a little in to the background. It think it make perspective more convincing. Can't wait final result .
Чоу очень чоуууткая вышла )) Даже странно, что у неё груди нет, в отличии от других женщин о.о ))))
Давай, давай, пуш ит пуш ит!
О_о Skolko narodu tyt russkiy znaet!)) But all the same I am pleasantly surprised, at you great sketchbook! Very to be pleasant your anatomy. You a little bit have more than practice with color also it is possible to be engaged in an illustration)
Danny_K yeah i will, you"ll see
teapo thanks mate, i just got some spare time now...that's all.
Creusa Hhhh... thanks
n1frit Yeap there are too many of us russian speakers around the world now (it's a secret but it's actually an old soviet plot to gain world domination...muahaha)
Anyways thank you, i'm trying to improve my painting skills as fast as i can not fast enough unfortunately.
Ramalooke yeah it kinda bothers me too, but i was too tired with that pic because i actually started it with the intention not to spend more than 2-3 hours on it, finished with more like 10 hours spent but i learned so much in the process too.
Here are the stuff from last two days:
doodles and sketches for a 4-5 page comic strip i'm working on to improve my story telling skills and clean penciling...
i posted the ugly doodles as well so you could see the process that goes in my head..i"ll show you the finished pages as soon as i can.
ugly quick (30 min) paint studies didn't want the accuracy just wanted to feel better with painting forms.
and a wip painting...trying to implement all what i've learned from watching sam and miles...it's kinda fun to implement PS techniques to Painter.
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Your pencil work is awesome!
Really LOL))))Yeap there are too many of us russian speakers around the world now (it's a secret but it's actually an old soviet plot to gain world domination...muahaha)
In what language it is easier to you to communicate ru or eng?
oh? this whole time i thought you were using photoshop but turns out it is painter XD. i love the comic-strip doodles. you seem to put a lot of energy and time into it even if they are just sketches :3
would like to see the comic strip when finished!
n1frit I actually prefer to talk and write in russian but i ain't got a russian keyboard on my laptop and it's dumb to write in russian using english alphabet.
teapo Thanks mate, yeap all i've got is a Painter IX....
smuli Thanks, i'm really struggling to get my own drawing more dynamic, still dunno how to do it and how i can get it better.
A. I hate my internet..that keeps crashing when i need to go to bed..
B. i hate my paper sb...because i can't put some pressure on my pencil without tearing the paper...
C. i hate that i don't have the money to buy some normal paper so i have to draw the comic pages on regular A4 printer paper...blah...
anyways after all that crap here are today's stuff..
3/4 of the comic pages....just starting and trying to make 'em inker friendly as i possibly can...
the wip painting...i use it as a study of different techniques and things...like planes
Your pencils are sooooo good)) I like that last still life as well!
Девочка, на которую мы смотрим сверху тоже хорошо получилась, правда почему-то не нравится мне эта зеленая штука с ней... А еще ее руку, которая к нам ближе наверное можно было немного выделить... например сделать тело за ней немного темнее. Знаю, поздно уже комментариии по этой работе писать -_-
Ludic Thanks mate
in2eternity Thank you the green thing is supposed to be Witchblade....i just love drawing and painting it
i see what you mean about the hand too...unfortunately for me you're totally right, but i really don't want to get to this pic in the nearest future...just because it's seems a bit boring to me now.
After a really shitty day.. here are some stuff...and me, i'm off to drinking till the dawn!!!!!!!!!!!!!
trying to make my lines more dynamic....with not much success...
and the wip... i learn so much while doing this but i have to make some more atmosphere/environment light studies.
Thanks mate, yeah i see what you mean.....i'm soooo frustrated with that pic that i'm really considering to quit painting it...it's just seems to me that i started something that is way out of my skills range for now......AAAAA....who the $&^% i'm trying to fool...it looks like crap!!!
Oh well...(goes back to his paper sb in shame...) here is the update probably the last one for now on that wip...