My friend has his birthday soon, and i decided to draw something as a present for him. He likes gasmasks, chernobyl and stuff a lot, so I wanted to make something related to those and got some pretty neat concept. Apart from my usual style, I wanted to make this traditionally. Before inking, is there something to improve, change or something to add perhaps? Its just a rough sketch so far, but give me all youve got, i want this to be perfect. thanks in advance
And if someone who speaks russia would kindly tell me how to write "do not drink" in russia?
Last edited by ~KJK~; July 10th, 2008 at 11:05 AM.
Heres a quick review of what I see.
Thanks for crits! Decided to do this entirely over again, starting from fixing composition and angle. This is a rough sketch made with computer, but the final piece will be traditional. Any improvement?
in your new comp, there is dead space on the right and you are goign to have to make a hell of a background or it will be weak
for a more dynamic comp you might try not showing all of the guy, haveing him comming in from the left but closer up so you can add some sick details.
and if you have the sign on the right i would suggest having it be a bit taller than him, also you could have the letters faded.
but take these with a grain of salt
its your picture >.>
Thanks again for crits Began to work on this on paper, with 0.1 mm inking pencil. The size of the paper is a3, but Ill crop it a bit in the end. How is the inkjob loonking so far?
I like where you've taken it.
Keep going on the muck pools, garbage piles and atmostphere. More haze in the sky might be nice.
Perhaps loose the bubbling where the tube meets the water (or rocks?), and instead work in a reflection with some wavelines.