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    Would love some critique/overall advice!

    I actually did this piece months ago towards the end of 2007, but I never got a proper critique on it. Since I tried a lot of new things with this piece, because I used it to represent my digital art in the portfolio I submitted to colleges, I think it would still help me a ton to get some tips.

    I can see a lot of things that would need to be worked on (a ton) for the future, but I'd like to see what others can tell me.

    Thanks!

    P.S. Here's to hoping, as I usually do, that others' monitors will be as so very bright as mine.
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    Hope this helps...
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    Rockett: I like what you have going so far, seems to me like your need to define the light source better to bring out more detail and edges! I also think you need to work on the structure itself and sky more... Goodluck!
    Keep drawing... And keep painting!

    My Sketchbook Critiques please!
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    Aryu: Thanks! Honestly, I should probably go back and look at the anatomy/perspective again, maybe redline...

    Racasdorph: Okay! Thanks for the tip; looking back on it, it's pretty soft all over, and nothing really pops out enough. The sky and structure definitely need help, you're right about that; it was one of my first attempts on both without direct reference.
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