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Hi all! I thought it was about time I posted my work on the forum. I've read so many helpful things here and it's about time to get my feet wet!
thanks for looking!
Very nicely rendered. I like the wistful look on his face, and the colors that back it up. Well done. My only crit is that I really wish his head broke the horizon line. The fact that it doesn't throws the composition off for me.
Thank you both for your replies! Nathan, I played with horizan line several times thinking the same thing that you were. I decided to have it above his head because it looked more like something stabbing him in the head than it did shoreline from a distance. I made sure the vertical pier post on the right pierced the horizon line to help anchor the composition.
Thanks again Donal and Nathan! I appreciate your comments and suggestions!