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    When Darkness Falls -- Purged

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    Hi! Now that I sucked you into CA I better be nice and be the first poster for your sketchbook. I'm sure we can find ways to torment each other into sketching on a regular basis, such as bumping one another's thread with 72 pt. reminders to DRAW already. The free world depends on it. At least that's how we should conduct ourselves. You know there's a member here (I'll have to look around to find her again) who does both sketching and plushies? So if you want to share your smilies too don't be shy.

    Is that an upside down message in the lower right hand corner *squints*

    My eyes aren't that good you know! :p

    Um--only major crit I have is the top left guy's left arm seems uncomfortably high for the angle you've drawn him.

    Oh and your catwoman has NO WHISKERS!!!!!!! Sorry couldn't resist.

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    Long legs are long The upper body is in proportion and it kind of looks like he's got long nails, though that could be sketch lines so I won't mention them I'm hoping to see more blood from you in the future and plenty of agony, so push those facial expressions! You need tears to wash down a bloodbath.

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    Are the arrows at the shoulders so you can narrow them? I'll always crit on the side of realism because I don't know manga so if very broad shoulders are the right style, ignore me. Right now he looks like a boy who's been trying on his father's battle gear--the gaps in the collar also give that impression. He just needs a larger neck and head to be in proportion and you're good to go. The costume detailing is gorgeous!

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    Hey, your stuff is looking pretty good. I much like the armor detailing in post #11.

    As for critiques, I'd say in post #9 the characters right shoulder is a bit too far out/high up, but only slightly. At least it seems that way to me.

    And like Maridius said, the guy's shoulders in post #11 seem a bit too broad, and as if the clothes he's wearing are too big for him. But I don't really know if that was a style choice, as I don't really follow manga/anime either. If so, just ignore me. Keep it up.

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    Love the long, elegant fingers! I hate how mine come out clunky and yours are graceful and you picked a challenging angle to draw!

    Before you get happy with details, double check the perspective. I'm not 100% sure it's correct (I suck at perspective). The shoulders seem too steeply angled if I'm looking slightly down at him--eye level is just above his head. I dunno. Draw a perspective line behind him and see if I'm dead wrong, then mock the hell out of me. Just don't change his face and hair. He's schmexy! I want to kiss his nose.

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    See this man... http://www.scribd.com/word/full/9616...sgq15xcl8o761o I think it will help you...
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    LEARN SOME MANNERS, clanlord Keep your crits to constructive criticism ONLY. I edited out the unnecessary parts of your post. See how much more effective it is now? Good. Use it as a model.
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    What I don't get: the specific exercises--I mean the people drawn in the boxes. I'm sure I'll get around to using them eventually myself, but I just don't get the point of boxing your people. :p If you could tell me (a few times as the question returns), either here or in FM chat, I would appreciate it.

    The girl you drew=ENVY. I wonder what she's holding, but whatever it is, it looks dangerous. I want to be able to draw that well, and I like the detail, though all I can read of your note beside her is "Hair=[unintelligible] flaming.? Is she a character, or just something you just drew without knowing what you were really going for?


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    So if I'm wrong I get mocked? Uh oh. Looking at the perspective boxes I'm wondering if I could be. I guess I need more work with it and maybe I'll fill a page with men in boxes. Did you erase your perspective lines? Sometime I can picture the lines, but more than that I have to see them on paper before I start.

    And clanlord, if you come back to see this, telling someone their style is shit isn't polite OR the best way to interest them in Hogarth. Learn some manners before you comment again. Remember, we're all about CONSTRUCTIVE criticism here.

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    Snitch, do you mind if I put that creature into some writing of mine?

    Looks good, though the box is kind of wonky; looks like something out of Alice In Wonderland. As for the computer mouse and the puzzle piece, they seem okay; I don't understand what you have pointed to on the puzzle piece.


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    This is something that occurs quite often... Manga vs. Realism.

    To me, Manga is much less appealing than art that tries to represent truth. I don't want to offend anyone, but I think that saying "Manga is my style" is just a lame excuse to avoid the hardship of realism.

    To improve or not to improve?

    To tell you the truth, I've been an avid amateur of Manga and Anime art. Just look at my old deviantart stuff... At that time I even told myself that I'll never ever touch realism art because that's just not me. Soon I realized that I was just afraid of going into an unknown territory. When I see great Manga art I think it's cool, but when I see a master's painting I think it's beautiful.

    Things will change... eventually. Good luck!

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    Heya, Ronald!

    Thanks for your comments.

    (^_^)

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    General Post: A Slight Explanation

    It occurs to me that I need to explain something prior to posting any more work; and this is more rant than explanation. And if this makes waves, so, be it. Btw, no flames, no insults, and absolutely nothing impolite. This is my SB and I'd like to keep it to its purpose: sketches.

    First:
    I'm well aware that there are plenty of different styles out there. I'm also well aware that I have much to improve upon.

    Second:
    I have never, and will never, use such a lame excuse as 'Manga is my style' to avoid improving. Note that, please before any comments are made to any responses I might give about my love of Manga.

    Third:
    If you don't like Manga, fine, you don't like it. Just don't tell me I should get rid of it, or that it's 'shit'. Appreciate that there are those who like Manga, who like to emulate its style in some way. Appreciate that your style may not appeal to everyone else, either.

    Fourth:
    My plans for improvement are my own. Don't automatically assume I'm not working on anything else because all that's posted so far is Manga-influenced work!

    Fifth:
    Thank you for ploughing through this and for your patience.


    Hmm... Guess this should also be at the beginning of my SB. Or, at least a calmer version, anyway. (Shall edit later to reflect that -- when I've calmed down, that is.)

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