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    Opey the Warhead 3 Page 17

    Here is another page of a comic I'm working on called "Opey the Warhead".

    Would anybody like to make any comments on the page?

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    Once again its all so well drawn, the faces are amazing, and everyone one has personality in the way they are posed, even Opey, who stunningly has human like movement. My only critique is somehow it seems like the girls face keeps changing, something ever so slightly, but im sure it looks different in each page you do. Just a thought.

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    This is really nice! It's great to see more comics around here. The story is clear the actions are clear. The only thing that bothers is that you seem to have skimped on the backgrounds.

    Even the 3rd panel has a lot of great rendering detail, lacks observational detail - like clutter on the teacher's desk, posters on the wall, backpacks under the desks, etc.

    keep posting! I've got to know if Opey makes it through the day!

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    Nice and clean style, interesting additions of detail (i.e. the wood grain on the counter) and a solid understanding of light and shadow! Overall, an interesting panel (all be-it slightly confusing, but thats more down to the story rather than your layout or style). Good job.

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    I'd like to thank everybody for the extremely useful comments. Tri_Beer_Gut, you're right about the shifting faces. She seems a bit pudgy in some panels and thinner in others. Her hair and face changes somewhat, too. I'll try to work on my consistency.

    Superskoda: your observation is an excellent one. The classroom seems a little sparse. A normal classroom would probably have more posters, objects, etc.

    Ibbo, thank you for the kind words. I appreciate them.

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