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    Warrior w/Divine Right

    Had an idea for a crusader type character who can call upon heaven to assist him at any time.... here you go.

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    Hey. Pretty cool composition but this is nowhere near finished. I'de move this to the critique forumn. You definitely need to check anatomy. Her raised arm is showing a gigantic shoulder blade and you might want to lower that joint. If you raise your own arm in the mirror and tilt your head like hers(get a girl to do it) you will see it needs to be redrawn. Also, her head is way too small for the size of the torso you have there. The left side of her abdomen under her left breast won't stick out that much from the angle she's in.

    For the man, he's very stiff. Our spinal column isn't straight and you first need to give him a neck, then maybe tilt his head.

    Desaturate those wings too and pick a different color. The orange could work if you make your light source orange, then have it reflect on gray or white wings.

    Hope that helps!

    Last edited by RoboBobo; July 1st, 2008 at 03:49 AM.
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