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    new items for my portfolio

    need help with critique

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    if anyone curious the first page the words say swallow your pride


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    top picture: I think the black and white drawing could use more value to show depth, specifically around the chest. At first glance, I didn't notice there was something strange about the chest.. it wasnt until I looked at the bottom picture, then back to the top, that I realized something was coming out! More contrast in depth will make it pop. The type looks nice, right now it's stealing all the attention. I think by making the drawing and the letters more equal in quality and intensity will make the artwork stronger, maybe by adding details to the face and hands etc. Or try making the eyes more expressive, the guy looks pretty mellow for having stuff reach out of him. It's an interesting concept, looks good and caught my eye, but feels unfinished. I hope you keep working on this

    bottom- to be honest, I'm not exactly sure what it is... maybe add more work on the drawing?

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    Quote Originally Posted by asionade View Post
    top picture: I think the black and white drawing could use more value to show depth, specifically around the chest. At first glance, I didn't notice there was something strange about the chest.. it wasnt until I looked at the bottom picture, then back to the top, that I realized something was coming out! More contrast in depth will make it pop. The type looks nice, right now it's stealing all the attention. I think by making the drawing and the letters more equal in quality and intensity will make the artwork stronger, maybe by adding details to the face and hands etc. Or try making the eyes more expressive, the guy looks pretty mellow for having stuff reach out of him. It's an interesting concept, looks good and caught my eye, but feels unfinished. I hope you keep working on this

    bottom- to be honest, I'm not exactly sure what it is... maybe add more work on the drawing?
    thanks for the info, i totally agree the font does take away from the individual, ill put more contrast into her

    the third one doesnt really make sence, just my friends civic, with the night life in the background

    it says hope because in my portfolio the page next to it is red, this one is green and the car is white (AKA mexican flag, green represents hope in the flag, red is for the blood of there hero's)

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