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June 19th, 2008 #1
Joseph's Drawings. [Occasional Nudity]
Well... I'm here for some honest critique on my sketches, which I had a hard time getting back on my DeviantArt account...
Be simple, be brutal, tear it apart, piece by piece, and the next pic in this thread will be at least twice as good as this one, which isn't saying much, but hey, it's a start.
Here's the sketch.
I look forward to your advice.
Last edited by Basham; January 8th, 2010 at 07:10 PM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberDecember 8th, 2009 #2
Not as bad as you make it out to be
But it's not enough! To get better critique you'll need to post alot of sketches in one go so that folks can get a better idea of where you're at as an artist. That's all I can say for now!
December 9th, 2009 #3
Decided to start updating this thing, again. I'll get right on those sketches, Slothboy, I appreciate the encouragement. I'll try to update this sketchbook as frequently as possible.
Here's a couple of sketches I've done just now, from Gray's Anatomy, and a few other internet references.
December 9th, 2009 #4
Heyyy, welcome to CA ! :]
Those studies look pretty good, keep postin more !!
That first pic you posted, try not to "chicken scratch" any lines, learn to be more fluid
December 9th, 2009 #5
ColorExcursion, thanks for the advice, but that first drawing was made more than a year ago. I think I've worked on my little hairy line problem, since then, though I still have some trouble getting a line to go the way I want.
Some more just now sketches:
Thirty seconds each.
Three minutes each.
Two different construction styles on the same pose. The one on the left is based on cylinders, the one to the right is based on angular shapes.
Well, that's all for tonight.
December 9th, 2009 #6
dude cool start for your sketchbook your drawings could use some more contrast or darkend more. Id just throw over an adjustment layer in photoshop for it.
keep it up looking forward to seeing your journey
sketchbook updated October 6th
December 9th, 2009 #7
You really got the motion down in those pelvic thrusts!
December 10th, 2009 #8
Great gestures. once youv've got that down I'd say work on the proportions more.
December 10th, 2009 #9
Omert, I don't own a copy of photoshop, but I will try to darken my lines. Journey, eh? I like the sound of that.
Thanks, Gogo. As we all know, there is no thrust quite like a pelvic thrust.
I'll make the study of proportions my top priority, Slothboy.
Oh, proportions. Fun. The following picture was referenced from an Andrew Loomis drawing.
The tricky thing about proportions is how a single miscalculation can set off an entire picture, as evidenced by the above. The next is a fifteen minute drawing referenced from a photograph on Characterdesigns.com.
Finally, some doodles from the imagination.
Hey, does anyone who isn't computer illiterate (as I am) know how I could shrink these pictures so that they are less massive? It's kind of an eyesore.
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December 13th, 2009 #11
Sorry about the lack of updates, recently. It's been a long week.
Thanks North, I've started drawing in pen until I can comfortably get darker lines down in pencil. I love your stuff, by the way.
Thirty seconds each.
Only piece from my three minute sketches that looked okay.
Another quick proportions study.
December 16th, 2009 #12
December 24th, 2009 #13