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    Please forgive me

    ....Aliens and people - so different in appearance, аnd in spite of all controled by the same emotions and feelings - love, joy, sadness...
    .... so, if he has been rough with her, it is time for him to ask for forgiveness...
    ...and may be she will forgive him...
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    My entry for Uplift Universe-Alien Relations,Challenge in CGTalk

    Please forgive me

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    i really think you did a great job, the lighting on the alien is very impressive and the girls skirt is rendered so well,

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    That's a cool image. Love the bright red hair, great simple way to create a focus point.

    my sketches here... http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=92997

    www.sevans.co.nz , visit them or a puppy dies!
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    Great work

    This may be just me, but I feel that the eyes on both characters aren't as effective as they could be. The eyes on the girl feel a little too stylized. Based off her eyes, her feelings don't read too well (though her gesture definitely excels in that department)

    With the alien, his eyes seem a little too stern. Based off the title, I'd assume that he's sincerely apologizing. However, the eyes make it seem that he's more upset of the fact that he has to apologize, rather than because he hurt her feelings - a sort of swallowing one's pride thing. Though this expression works, I'm not too sure if that's the feeling you were aiming for. I'm just nitpicking though.

    You've rendered a marvelous piece here. Well done
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    Lovely stuff. I really dig the girl .. The Alien is cool too, but is posture makes me think he's on the verge of collapsing

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    Hay CA
    I'm so happy to hear nice words for my work
    Thank you for your comments and crits guys!

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