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    Nice stuff! Very crisp and solid! I love your female figures man. I noticed a funny mistake on one of the drawings in post #7 though: the one foot was on backwards! Did a couple redlines to fix it... I think the one on the right would look best, but that might just be me.

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    This is going to sound weird, but are you that blonde girl coming to Sheridan next year for animation? I was a Fundies student last year and your art is very familiar to me, if you're the person I am thinking of you showed me your portfolio in the Pit.

    Annnyway, I dig the gesture studies you did a whole lot, and your speedpaintings are looking great too.

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    Hey thx alot aspect for the fix up! i see what you mean, yea that leg is kinda messed up.

    Humm dubs i don't think i;m that blond girl (i'm a dude) whos coming to sheridan animation next year=D I'm going to be 2nd year animation when you come for 1st year ^_^ hopfully i bee seeing ya? O btw why don't you post your Sketch book on CA a great way to learn =D

    AND OOOO GAD!!! THIS IS THE FiRST time it has happen to me my PHOTO shop died on me before i could save... so no update =_= so gay!

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    its has been a while... so here is a wip..

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    Here is a quick concept for a greek temple guard

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    here is a school project which my kind frnd helped me on (alot, she is very good with colors =D).

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    love it plz give me advice

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    TWO, love yer work man, you've got a lot of talent. Were all learning, I 'll leave the crits to the other guys. You keep posting, I'll keep looking, I think your great.

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    a tribal and a color study

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    reposting my greek temple guard concept.. because it was 2 big =_=

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    the kratos pic is awsome
    that is my second fav psp game (monster hunter freedom 2 is #1)
    did you ever draw manga cuz your eyes on your chacters look influnced by manga shows
    great work

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    another tribal concept

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    I love the dynamics in your drawings! This tribal concept is interesting; however, I have to say her breasts are a little awkward. The right one is informing me of an ample bust but the left one is reminiscent of a man's pectoral. A little weird to say, but as a person with a bit of a bust myself, there should be a more volume to it and a bit more protrusion from the breast plate. Also, the suggestion of fingers on the raised hand doesn't really translate into the gesture I think your going for. Darker shadow's may do the trick. Hope that was useful. :]

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    Ah thx wickedqueen for those helpful tips, breasts are always a challenge for me =( i can't seem to grasp the volume of it.

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    a viking concept of some sort, I must say i think i am getting into a habit of drawing nipple plates O_O

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    I can't beleve you're a guy and can't grasp boobs! Little joke there!
    Yeah thats the only part that lets your Viking lady down I think. They should have that gentle concave to the nipple. Love your work though.

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    haha yea.. i failed again T.T (Curses!!!) but thx for the tip on breast drawing doncam =D

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    Quote Originally Posted by doncam View Post
    I can't beleve you're a guy and can't grasp boobs! Little joke there!
    Yeah thats the only part that lets your Viking lady down I think. They should have that gentle concave to the nipple. Love your work though.
    lol
    sry just had to say that

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    ok... so busy with school that i barly have time to do my own stuff. so here is a work in progress.

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    hey man brilliant sketchbook, you have some brilliant characters in here, you really have got a great understanding of anatomy.
    keep up the great work

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    Hey Bagg, thx for the compliments.

    And here is a croped version of the previous post a little bit more rendered. (i kinda like the rougher pencil version better). Anyways reading week is coming up,, which means i finally have more time to do more of my own stuff *jumps for joy*

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    Thumbs up

    First off, your armor designs are sweet!, and your general feel for creating a character is awesome. But to me it seems the torso leading to the legs and hips is wrong on alot of these, and that the legs seems to be too far apart, im no expert but thats just my 2 cents.

    Feel free to stop by my SB and leave some crits too.

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    hey thx for crits Natzuur, but can you point out whats wrong with the attachment, because i drew it to my best understanding of anatomy, i can't really ping point whats wrong with it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheWishfulOne View Post
    hey thx for crits Natzuur, but can you point out whats wrong with the attachment, because i drew it to my best understanding of anatomy, i can't really ping point whats wrong with it.
    Well to be honest that one is one of the good ones, not sure if its supposed to be a guy or a girl tho, but it seems fairly feminine, so if it is supposed to be a girl the body seems kind of.... flat (no not because there is a lack of boobs) I guess the best way to express what im saying is to show you.

    P.S. don't hate me for this =(

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    ahh, ooook soo defining the form...well if thats the case it shouldn't be too hard. humm now that you mention it it seems most of my drawings lack, the waste/mid area, so i guess i think the future i should extend the attachment area between torso and pelvis.

    here is a quick change

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    decided to go straight to painting in photoshop without pencil lines.. and boy its hard and time consuming T.T (i'm such a noob)

    so here is a sad attempt T.T

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    Thumbs up

    Those last two images look great! def finish them. The shape is a lot better now.

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    a sith women of some sort

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    I like all the stuff you got, I see your pulling for concept, but try a storyline, and with something to get you on the road to original...but all in all good stuff, i'll drop in on ya now and than to see whats posted...

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