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    Ready to GO

    so this is the finished version of the contest pic i was working on for about 1 week. crits are welcome

    enjoy

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    I think you should have given it a few more days in production, although I'm not sure when the deadline for the contest submission is.

    Nice picture.

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    okay, now i'm unsure if a shall send it at this stage..damn deadline is in 8 hours... what do you actually mean tree, owl, shadow,saturation, hue, background, charakcter evereything

    thanks though

    would be glad about requests

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    here i refinded the bg added an owl since the image was to small from the width and i had to extend it to the sides...added an owl instead of plane bush..
    think most will give crit but can't do better at the moment think i should go back to crit center

    thanks though

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    either i'm smoking crack or she only has 4 fingers on her right hand. where's the 5th?

    other than that, i like it a lot. GL!

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    I'm not too sure but I don't think her left knee/shin could be in that angle if her left leg in general is straight out in that direction.
    Also could just use a tad more detail on the hair.

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    Very nice, I like it a lot. I do think she could use a slight contrast increase, just to pop her out of the background a little more (see how dark the shadows are on the owl's perch stump?) or maybe just darken her shadows a tiny bit. I also agree with how her left knee is situated, it'd look better if that leg was just a full on side view, a quick rotate of that shin armor would do it.

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    If you do rotate her left shin/knee, extend the length a bit more.
    Kaldorei are tall, she looks petite for one.

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    Her left shin looks way too short and I'm quite concerned about the 4finger thing.
    Also the motion in her hair seems inconsistent. She looks as if she's striking a pose and the hair just magically moves up.
    It could be the wind but if it was I think it would look more random, now it all moves to one area like one big mass.

    Really nice drawing otherwise.

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