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What I need from you guys is ... well, I need some help on the other leg, the one in the background. It looks wrong to me. Perhaps too long or the knee is drawn wrong. The upper arm is wrong, I know that for sure. I need to find a reference for that. Totally need to fix the hand holding the necklace. Closer foot is too long I think.. Yeah, too long. Now the image:
Here's the update:
Three new updates. Oldest to Newest[/SIZE][/FONT]
AND NOW THE FINISHED FORM as seen here
Last edited by Fyzion; July 20th, 2008 at 11:31 PM. Reason: adding updated picture
Is it alright if I redline to show you what I mean with my explanation?
ooh yes that would be really nice ^w^
I do hope this isn't too harsh. Basically, your main problems were your anatomy. Try looking at reference photos if you're not sure how something looks. these are just some of the more obvious problems I've spotted. I hope this doesn't seem too harsh.
ohh thank you so much!
i'm working on it now. i had to do a different figure drawing so i could get a handle on what arms and feet look like. so i think i'll be able to fix it. then i'll show you what i have later.
i updated the image
The biggest issues I can see is that the front legs lower half you have the calf muscle melding directly into the ankle. The back leg you have the lower leg bowing out ( you have partially fixed this) but the foot is bent way too far backwards. Ankles and ligaments dont stretch that far. Look at your own foot as you try to point it downward. it just doesnt flex that far.
my foot likes to go straight, but the toes don't go straight. i'll fix that in flash, where i'm inking it. i can sort of see the ankle problem with my own leg as reference.
ok *reread what you wrote* i'll try to fix the foot as best i can without making it look stupid XD