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    Question I Rookie

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    I like this. I really like your cartoon style and coloring. Her torso is too wide for her arms and legs though, but that just may be part of your style. Also, I'm not digging those boobs. They just seem... I dunno, not part of her. Sort of like when you would stuff water ballons down your shirt and pretend you had breats but everyone totally could tell they were fake.

    Other than that, great job!

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    welcome to conceptart

    the coloring is clean and works well with the stylization.
    the linework as well is done technically efficiently.

    the anatomy (i understand its not supposed to be representationally accurate) is still bothersome in its inconsitancy. pardon the vulgarity, but all i can think of is this figure nude with a gaping cavernous vagina.

    be weary of that gradient tool too.

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    like the hair a lot

    style kind of reminds me of

    sabrina the teenage witch cartoon

    might want to look at some of that work, to give you some inspiration?

    just a thought

    but yeah boobs just dont seem like they belong there

    good luck

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    Your line work could stand more variation. Right now it doesn't feel that varied and in a cartoon-esque inked work I'd appreciate that more.

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    One thing to add is that it took me a while to notice that there's a creature at the back of her head. That means something is not done right, since I presume this is the main idea. It might be due to sticking it so closely to the canvas edge or maybe you just need to rethink the whole pose which is quite boring.

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    oh wow.. I NEVER noticed that until you pointed it out. Word on that, SAGIR.

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    Wow, I wasn't aware that it's hard to notice Samson.

    I was actually trying on the lineart without oing extreme. Guess I need to try more.

    LOL at Greif's comment.

    Back to work for me.

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