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    still no improvement

    Last edited by frenpalacio; June 6th, 2008 at 01:02 AM.
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    Your anatomy in the middle pic might be a bit squeezed. I could be wrong, but it looks like you smudge your work with your finger trying to give shading. Try not to do that. It takes away line quality. Right now you have decent forms, but you need to practice with line weight. That will make your sketches really pop.

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    This is a good start.
    the hand in the first pic is well done.
    and I think the contrast in the batman pic is really nice.
    post again soon.

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    Keep practising, that' the key. Oh, and use reference also, that's the other key. >_>;;

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    got it!robo dude!

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    nice shading in everything over all. Don't forget about how the boy curves and how shading works on spherical objects and where the light source is.

    interestined perspective on the over head drawing.

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