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    2d/3d Sketch Book

    I have been reluctant to post anything, but how will I improve if no one critiques me? so Here I go...
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    Just some doodle at work...
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    I like it!
    Your latest post with the eagle thingy in it looks really mysterious

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    Thank you I'm glad you liked it.

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    Greath pictures! I absolutly love the first two...

    Only thing i can crit is that sabertoothed ninja lacks a bit of depth! but it is still looking awesome!

    later

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    Death Guy and Corrupt look a l bit busy and flat. Some more variety in tone might fix that.

    Your digital stuff looks bloody fantastic man. Fenix looks very good, as does your DIII entry. How'd you do that little tile vortex/tunnel?
    Check out my sketchbook.

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    The first picture is cool and cute at the same time!
    My Sketchbook [ACTUALLY UPDATED!]

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    Quote Originally Posted by BadGeometry View Post
    Death Guy and Corrupt look a l bit busy and flat. Some more variety in tone might fix that.

    Your digital stuff looks bloody fantastic man. Fenix looks very good, as does your DIII entry. How'd you do that little tile vortex/tunnel?
    Oh man This is a late reply but thanks guys for the crits, Im working on giving my drawings a bit more form. The tunnel was created with Painter and the glow brush, oh and a wacom tablet. I started with large strokes and worked my way down to smaller ones and varied the color here and there. IF you need a more visual explanation I wouldn't mind putting something together.

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    i love the pure evil your art has.

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    Some stuff that I've been working on.

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    nice model!!!!
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    This should answer your question, plus my DSG1394

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    Nice work! Even with my strong hatred of tarutaru I can see that model is sweet.

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    I was going to tell you on vent when the kung-fu deal was over, but it seems more fitting that i post here instead. I'm really digging the 3D, no crits there i've never done 3D in the first place but it looks like you did a really good job. However the pencil work looks like you need to add more value between the lights and the darks, and there is something stiff and klunky about your shapes, im not sure what. I suggest (and im not sure if this will help) but maybe do some still lives of objects that have more curved shapes to them so you might develop a more advanced idea of the flow. Awsome stuff.




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