i think your vibrance in the color tone needs work.
your pieces are nice, the color just throws me off. everythings too waaay in my face. you know? try to tone it down a bit and see what you come up with. contrast is nice, but subtlety makes everything come together.
Witness the contents of mind, the visions and sounds, the thoughts, as clouds passing through the vast expanse - the sky-like nature of mind. The rootedness of Being is in emptiness, clarity and awareness: unborn, unspoilt, stainlessly pure. ~Alex Grey